Styles of advertising ?? what do you think?

[123o123]

I was having a look on adtrader (our local mag to sell horses) and was looking at the different styles in which people advertise, as im coming up to selling my horses.What do you think to how this ad is written ? would that draw you in to the advert or put you off? im not sure about the style but not having a go as lovely pony, just wondering what would attract you to an ad?

http://www.adtrader.co.uk/pets-and-...-mummy-is-going-to-uni-so-she_708444_cpn.html

 

[Sealine]

It would put me off I'm afraid but if it was what I was looking for I would try to see through the style of the ad and extract the facts. I can see that this style of ad may be effective for a child's pony if a child was reading the ad.