Suggestions for Sharer/Person to exercise advert

[southdowns]

I am going to advertise for someone to either share or exercise my horse as i need more time for work, OH etc. Its a situation where i don't have to find someone but it would be nice if i could.

I only want someone experienced as although my horse is very good and sensible he is quite young and green. Could anyone comment on my advert and let me know if they think its too off putting for people or whether you think i could add anything? Thanks

16.2hh 6yr old fun ISH gelding looking for experienced rider/sharer in Sussex. I am looking for a rider/sharer to help me with my lovely horse due to needing time for other things. For experienced rider only who has knowledge of young/green horses. He is registered BSJA and there is the opportunity to compete in all disciplines for the right person. I am open to any suggestions of arrangements so please contact me to discuss further.


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[peanut]

Sounds good to me.

 

[pairciban]

I like it, you might not get many people interested but hopfully the right person would read it the same way as me. It might be worth putting something about how he is in the stable etc. As I always say honesty is the best policy, Theres no point in making the ad to 'rosey' and getting a load of plebs!! Good luck with him he sound nice.

 

[browbrow]

I think its perfect as you dont have specific guidlines to what you want - its nice and brief and people can call you to discuss their situation which is always better to do. You specified that you want a good rider and thats all you can do - be warned you will still 11 year old girls calling asking if he is ok for a begginer - lol bless them - You may want to addwhere he is based at a push but its not essential

Good luck and I really hope you find someone