What do you think??

[DiamondSR]

So after quite a lot of consideration I think I am going to put my boy on the market sometime soon. What does everyone think of the following wording for my ad, do you think anyone would call?? Anything important I have missed? Thanks!!

Competed unaffiliated SJ/XC/dressage, always in the ribbons and plenty of scope to go further. King of Diamonds bloodlines. Willing and honest with a bold, careful jump and balanced paces. Snaffle mouth. 100% catch/shoe/box/clip. Very affectionate nature and easy to handle. Hacks alone or in company and good in traffic, but can be sharp so not a novice ride and needs a calm and confident rider.

Sad sale of this much loved horse due to lack of time to do him any real justice, so a good home is a priority.

 

[hessy12]

sounds lovely and heartbreaking for you..... think age and height would be useful to include too.
I am sure you will find a good home but i've heard the market is rather slow at the moment.

 

[0ldmare]

Age, height, colour....Also not sure your actual ad says if mare or gelding (although I know he is a he because of you first paragraph)

 

[DiamondSR]

Oh sorry, it's because I copy and pasted it from my Word advert which has it in the title! Missing info reads:

16HH 8YO REG. ISH GELDING
Super smart, eye-catching all-rounder/event