what does this sound like

[jensheff26]

14.2hw mare 12yrs old available for part loan,looking at 3-4 days a week, must stay at current field great for novices she had had a hard life so would like someone older to take her out on leasurely plods she is totally perfect 100% in traffic and to handle will go alone or in company shes no speed demon but loves to plod about village and woods no timewasters or daytrippers. does it sound ok and do you think anyone would be interested.

 

[Divasmum]

Content ok but you need some full stops to break it into sentences. Also location needs to be included

 

[CeeBee]

Shame she is only for part loan, she would be great for my family!
I think your description is fine and would be very surprised if no one took up your offer.
You might just mention in the ad if any financial contribution is required. Good luck!