Will someone please proof read my statement?

[only_me]

pretty please? constructive advice please and pm me and i will send it to you!

please?

i need lots of help!!

eta - sorry, my personal statement for university

 

[Smash]

Statement about what?

I'd be happy to take a look if I had any idea what it was about.

 

[LankyDoodle]

Yup, I'll take a look. PM me

 

[Ezme]

Oh god, the dreaded personal statement. They all the biggest pile of crap.... good luck tho!

 

[kerilli]

yep, happy to.