Wording for advert - does this sound ok?

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Hi. I've decided to sell one of my little ones and was going to put the following ad in local tack shops/free ads etc. Does it sound okay? Advice much appreciated
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Hopefully he may be going to a local family but wanted to do an advert just incase that doesn't happen.

REGISTERED MINIATURE SHETLAND

Chasend Cassidy

Show quality five year old Grey Dun gelding for sale.

Very friendly and safe. Easy for a small child to handle.

Ideal for showing M&M/Young Handler, pet or companion.

£400 ONO
 
***Camerton runs off to rob a bank!!!***

***Camerton then decides 4 is enough and wishes chumsmum all the best selling her pony ***

It might be worth stating his height tho - especially far all us mini freaks who like them as small as possible.
 
Oh yes - forgot the height - will measure him! The reasons for sale sound pretty poor - even though he doesn't cost that much to run, it still costs me a bit every month for grazing/teeth/feet/worming and every penny seems to matter at the moment
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has he done anything as yet? showing etc. Does he let farrier trim? Does he travel? Does he clip?
These are all questions that a showing person would ask.
Is he easy to catch?
 
Good questions! I haven't shown him but have a couple of respected shetland showing friends who think he would do well locally - maybe ok at bigger shows. But I haven't shown him myself so I understand that would go against him. He is fine for farrier, skips up the ramp and fine to catch. He loves fuss and grooming! He is well behaved and not nippy/sharp - that's why I think he would be good for a child to show. I've never clipped him so don't know that one. Thanks for advice
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REGISTERED MINIATURE SHETLAND

Chasend Cassidy

Show quality five year old Grey Dun gelding for sale. .....hh.

Very friendly and safe. Easy for a small child to handle.

Ideal for showing M&M/Young Handler, pet or companion. Sad sale due to change in finances.

£400 ONO

There
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Changed it a bit
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