Writing about my horsey life.....

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Hello,

Been reading some of the lovely, well written stories on here and been inspired to write my own. Its the store of my horsey life......Ive only started it today so its got lots to go. Just wanted to see if you guys like it and would be interested in following it.....cheers! :D

I have always loved to read and write. I can recall winning several prizes usually books, for creative writing when I was at primary school. The highlight of my school term was when the ‘book club’ used to come round. As primary school pupils we would be given a thin book catalogue then metal book shelves would appear in a large open area of the school corridor and we were able to buy the books we had ordered. Throughout the rest of the year I would have to supplement my reading hobby with regular trips to James Thin the book shop. Walking downstairs to the children’s and teenage books section was like entering an Aladdin’s cave of goodies for me. Looking back now, I think my passion for books and of course horses, was ignited in the same instance when aged three my dad’s friend Davie gifted me a book called ‘the Golden Book of Ponies’. It was a large hard backed book with a pretty un-child friendly beige cover with golden writing on the front. Inside however were a range of horse quotes and facts about different breeds and typed of horses but it was the fabulous pictures of young girls on well groomed ponies donning red ribbons and showjumpers freeze framed mid jump that caught my (short spanned three year old) attention . I still have the book and to this day I don’t know why my dads friend thought I would like it because as far as I know I had given my parents no indication that one day I would be possessed by this horse obsession! If my parents had any idea of the number of future ‘can I get a pony?’ conversations this book would have provoked they probably would have chucked the book on my grans’ coal fire!
I spent most of my childhood building a shrine to all things horsey in my bedroom. Why my parents put so much effort onto decorating my bedroom with pink rosy wallpaper and matching border I will never know as it was quickly concealed by a variety of posters from ‘Horse & Pony’ and ‘Pony’ magazine. I loved to have pictures of my show jumping idols on the wall and was so chuffed when I finally met and had my photograph taken with Geoff Billington at a display him and Oliver Townend were doing few years ago. I also met Ollie but I doubt if I ever had his picture on my wall as he probably would have been too young back then, but I may be wrong.
In my room I had an old mahogany burro to store my books. I read many a horsey book in those days but when I read the Patricia Leach stories I was absolutely enchanted. She wrote about Jilly, a young girl who would ride a fiery chestnut mare through the moors. I wished I was Jilly.
It wasn’t until I was about nine or ten when my friend J asked if I wanted to join her for a riding lesson at the local riding school. Of course I jumped at the chance and seeing my excitement my mum agreed to let me. The riding school was only roughly a ten to fifteen minute drive from home but my mum didn’t drive and my dad was always busy with work which had prevented me from going there before. I was nervous with excitement on the morning of my first riding lesson. My mum and I didn’t know much about horses. (All I knew was that I loved them and that they loved mints) so I filled my pockets with XXX strong mints which my mum had bought from the corner shop. My mum was a worried that the smell of the mints emanating from me when I was on board would turn the horses crazy or something so I left a few n the pocket of my red cotton gilet and put the other two hundred or so (ok, slight exaggeration) in a see through bag for my mum to carry. It must have been about half past on a Saturday afternoon when J and her mum arrived in their car to collect me and my mum for J and I’s lesson at two o’ clock. It was a cold day and we arrived early to get our ponies brought around to the indoor in good time. My name was paired up on the list with a pony called S which was ticked off by the riding instructor before a stable hand was called upon to get him tacked up. S was a bright grey 13.2hh, extremely cute, extremely round pony with a hogged mane. I thought he was amazing and even more so once I was on him. After my lesson I walked around the yard to meet all the horses and ponies and gave them all mints. I’m sure the liveries at the stable were thrilled about that! But hindsight and all that...
Soon I was having regular weekly lessons on S, sometimes having to ride other ponies if someone had beaten me to booking him first. As my riding capabilities improved I rode a large variety of ponies and as I grew taller I settled on a 14.2 thoroughbred mare called G as my favourite. She was an older horse but although her hips protruded and her ribs were visible she was athletic and like me, she loved to jump.
 
That's a great idea, I've always wanted to write a book but the work involved scares me! Good luck would love to read more....
 
woohoo! I got some replies! :D

thanks, I enjoyed writing it so far so was hoping someone might enjoy reading it! off to type some more up...shall keep u posted :D:D
 
Sounds just like me as a child. Dad didn't like horses but I did have a donkey..he kept me amused until I outgrew him. I then waited until I was 50 before I started lessons. I'm quite hooked :)

Well done for writing it all down. I have kept a written record of my progress and feelings about what and how I'm doing but it's fr my eyes only. :)
 
OP are you part of a writing group? I know a few people that are members of various groups and they find them invaluable for getting feedback on their writing :) Good luck!

Thanks NN......no Im not. I just started writing today as full of the cold and had such a busy working week that I needed a way to let off steam so here I am! lol....thats interesting though, I would be up for that if you could give me more details?....:)
 
Sounds just like me as a child. Dad didn't like horses but I did have a donkey..he kept me amused until I outgrew him. I then waited until I was 50 before I started lessons. I'm quite hooked :)

Well done for writing it all down. I have kept a written record of my progress and feelings about what and how I'm doing but it's fr my eyes only. :)

Thats great TM! Im actually undercover.....Im a regular poster so this gives me both an audience AND anonyminity (sp)......you should put your up, I for one would love to have a read :)
 
Good for you on getting started - I have a plan for a book but haven't got round to putting pen to paper yet! :o

The people that I know who write are either part of online writer groups linky here for some tips or have local writing groups that meet every week or two (there are a few advertised on my local Gumtree) so maybe look into those and see what suits you best :)

(ETS: oooh you sneaky beast being undercover :p )
 
a wee bit more for you.............. :)



G provided with me with many fun times at Tuesday evening jumping classes for more ‘experienced’ riders. I use the term ‘experienced’ loosely. However the fun times only lasted for 1 hour a week and I wished so much that I could tuck G up in her stable with a bucket of feed and go home knowing that she was mine and that I could groom her and ride her as often as I liked. To be honest it wasn’t all about the riding for me. I just wanted to buy her the matching headcollar and leadrope sets and the colour coded buckets that I had circled in the Robinsons catalogue. I would circle all the horsey items that I wanted to buy for my ‘future’ horse. My ‘future’ horse was well kitted out...in my imagination anyway.
I begged (and I mean begged!) my parents to let me have a pony of my own but it was never to be. I would beg my mum daily but my parents just couldn’t afford it. I am the youngest of three both of which who have not the slightest interest in anything equestrian but I reckoned I would have a go at talking my mum round since my sister and I managed to do so when we wanted a dog! It was hard for my mum. She honestly wanted me to have one as she knew how much it would mean to me. I would see the mums at the riding school helping muck out their kids ponies and I so wished I could trade lives. I felt so hard done by. If I didn’t ever become a horse owner my life wouldn’t be worth living and that was no exaggeration.
At one point my mum contacted the riding school and asked how much it would cost for me to have a pony. I remember standing inside the stable block anxiously awaiting my mum to finish her conversation with the owner of the riding school feeling like I was one number away from hitting the lotto jackpot, only for my mum to walk in with the yard owner and confirm that I wasn’t a winner. The yard owner said that costs aside, having a pony was hard work and that hard work would have had to come from my parents as well as I was too young to carry heavy water buckets and take full responsibility myself, although I do wonder how much of this explanation actually came from him and how much my mum had to do with it! During the explanation my eyes didn’t meet theirs once. I stood stroking the face of a riding school pony who had popped his head over the door out of concern for me. The tears spilled down my cheeks and onto the pony. I was crushed.

I kept attending my riding lessons, even those were getting expensive as the fees increased over time. I was never really allowed to be at the stables by myself as my mum was aware that it could be a dangerous place and she never really wanted me to be seen as one of those children who are just seen to be hanging around. To be fair I dont think she wanted me to be hanging around with the groups of kids who had ponies there as most of them were spoiled and unruly and hung around in the feed room. A dark smelly place that was all kinds of dodgy. That and the fact that some of them chose to play on the carrot pile, throwing carrots at passers by. An orange Mount Everest where if you lost your footing you were definitely going to need rescuing by air ambulance.
 
Thats great TM! Im actually undercover.....Im a regular poster so this gives me both an audience AND anonyminity (sp)......you should put your up, I for one would love to have a read :)

Now that's an idea.. Lol..don't tell anyone but I still bring in treats to the horses. Mostly it's for whoever I ride in lessons but then all the others start making eyes at me so I feel mean and end up treating them all :)
 
Now that's an idea.. Lol..don't tell anyone but I still bring in treats to the horses. Mostly it's for whoever I ride in lessons but then all the others start making eyes at me so I feel mean and end up treating them all :)

i wont tell if you wont tell! ;)
 
your story sounds a lot like mine but I did not have a pink room. :)

I enjoy writing, but do not do much since kids, I did go to a creative writing group when pregnant with my second son 15 years ago. It was fun, challenging and most important gave feedback which is important.


my first story was something i had wanted to write down for ages, when i wrote it, and started reading it, the teacher stopped me, gave me (and the class) a challenge, something we had to write on the spur of the moment, using a theme she gave us , plus anything from our experiences, this was fun, and what i wrote down was a lot better, in fact the whole class wanted the next instalment.

So if you can join a writing group then you will probably get comments from people who know what they are doing, and not from people like me who do not. :)
 
Jeeve I think thats a great Idea and I will defo look into it...

Debsey1.....ok you asked for it!! I havent read or planned what ive written,im just letting it flow!!

There were some horses in a field at the end of our village. No one ever seemed to tend to them and the field was horrible. There was a steep hill at the back of it and what was at the other side of that hill is to this today, a mystery. Maybe it was like the Bermuda triangle. If you went there you never came back- no explanation. My friend, a boy named P lived next to the fields. I was always so jealous that he could see real horses everyday and not just pictures of them. The field had a pretty poorly secured metal gate leading onto a fast but quiet road. At the opposite side what I can only describe as a VERY small stable yard which consisted of one stand alone stone built stable which had a painted green split door, two others tucked out of sight and a couple of small rickety rooms which were being used as a feed room and a room for equipment (basically a tack room without any actual tack!) The miniature yard did not have a gate to secure it, only a heavy metal chain which was loose and rusted and hung loosely about three feet off the ground-ludicrous to recall! In this miniature yard lived a bay thoroughbred mare and her chicken companion. Me and my group of friends would hang out at Ps house and take trips over to see this horse patting her and giving her apples over the chain.
It turned out that my dad drank in the same pub as the father of the lady who owned the bay mare. The lady worked in the pub and didn’t really have any interest in the horse anymore since she had retired her and spent very little time visiting her. My dad told the man that I was keen on horses and he said I was welcome to spend time with ‘Lady’. From there on she was my ‘honorary’ horse. I was well aware she wasn’t mine but I intended on treat her as such using all my ‘horse and pony magazine’ acquired expertise to care for her. I acquired a second hand wax jacket from a girl I had got chummy with at the riding school (she had moved to Canada with her family and we stayed in touch as pen pals for some time) and teamed them with my muck boots and would carry my large navy blue grooming box which was covered in pony stickers from magazines along to the other side of the village to tend to ‘my’ horse. It was a dream come true!
 
ooh wasnt going to write anymore but Im enjoying myself!!!..........


It was a fair old walk to ‘ladies field’ as my friends and I called it and my mum wasn’t keen on me going at alone. I have no idea why I didn’t just take the bus. So she would come with me sometimes. Eventually she let me go alone with my group of friends, safe in the knowledge that Ps mum and dad were just across the road if there were to be any sort of emergency. (Taking into account there were no mobile phones in these days)
It was pretty evident that Ladies’ owner had lost interest some time ago when my friends and I took a look in her stable. I remember the stains up the walls and the ammonia smell which was enough to make your eyes water. It was awful. On inspection of the yard we noticed there was a wooden barn which house square bales of hay. There was a big step up to the barn with planks of wood over it which about as secure as standing on a seesaw. The two stables around the corner faced each other directly and the doors were painted a pale aqua green. The stable doors were too high for us to peer over so we unbolted them and had a look inside confirming emptiness. In the rickety feed room next to ladies stable was her feed bin. A large metal bin filled with oats. Not surprising that Lady could be a bit bonkers at times but at this time I was blissfully unaware of the possible implications of feeding an unworked horse pure oats! The field was tiny, far too small for any horse to be kept. The ‘field’ was L shaped and the back part of the field was hidden from view. Just as well really because if the authorities had seen it the horse would have been taken away for sure. It was chest high in some areas with weeds some of which were yellow and I worried it may have been ragwort but wasn’t too sure. The bits that weren’t overgrown had all manner of plastic debris and scrap metal littered around.
The presence of ladies owner at ‘ladies field’ was an extremely rare sight so sometimes when we would turn up to find lady locked in her stable we were never sure who had put her there. Sometimes the chicken (who we called Chuck) was locked in there with her going stir crazy, for heavens sake! Lady and Chuck were always grateful to have the door opened. Lady more so than chuck who strutted around in a pretty obnoxious whether we did nice things for him or not. I loved seeing Ladys reaction when she was left out stable it was so exciting when she cantered past us.
As time went on the group of kids gathering at ladies field expanded. Word was passed around school that this was the place to hang out so some would come for the social aspects and a few of us wanted to look after Lady. I was there for both to be honest but mainly because I loved having a horse in my life. I don’t know why a stop wasn’t put to the congregations sooner as we used to have competition to see who could jump the metal gate at the other side of the road resulting in the gate falling flat over into the mud, and I do remember Ladies chain coming undone a couple of times risking her getting loose on the road but nothing was ever said, probably because the area was quiet and we pretty much unseen by any adults. Lady seemed to enjoy the attention from all the children however chuck did not. Not surprising really as I recall a couple of the boys luring him onto one side of the unsecured plank over the step up to the hay shed before jumping on the other side creating a chicken catapult.
 
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