Critique please

[Bossanova]

Just advertised Mustard *wobbles*

Any comments welcome, sorry but the pics are the best I have. Full credit goes to Halfstep who battled very difficult weather conditions tonight to very kindly take them for me!!
http://www.horsemart.co.uk/AdvertRef/HM807L4D6/Web/displayhorsedetail.asp

 

[madhector]

aww.. little Mustard, still love that face, ad looks good to me, very honest. Pictures arnt the best, but the description sells him well. Good luck selling him

 

[icestationzebra]

Thought you were keeping him

 

[Bossanova]

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Thought you were keeping him

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I really want to but I have no money and I cant afford to event Moon if I dont get money soon

 

[Bounty]

Nice ad wording though! Will steal that when I need to advertise Fia.
He did race didn't he?

 

[MizElz]

Awww he's lovely! I wouldnt have thought you would have any problem selling him; he's just what I was looking for when I found Ellie!

Good luck, hope you find a lovely home for him!

 

[Bossanova]

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Nice ad wording though! Will steal that when I need to advertise Fia.
He did race didn't he?

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Yep, on the flat last summer

 

[Bounty]

I like the exclusion of that, and the absence of the word 'thoroughbred'

 

[kerilli]

very nice, seems very reasonably priced.
only one thing, spelling, "faze" not "phase", you put "he is very difficult to phase".
hope you find a lovely home for him.

 

[Bossanova]

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very nice, seems very reasonably priced.
only one thing, spelling, "faze" not "phase", you put "he is very difficult to phase".
hope you find a lovely home for him.

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Oooh Durhhhhh silly me, thankyou!!!!

 

[Nuttymanxmare]

Awww hun

Its a fab advert though and hes very well priced for what he's done even with the vice.

You'll sell him in no time.

 

[Mavis]

great ad - just what I was looking for a few months ago. I'd definitely have phoned to arrange to see him when I was looking, the photos are alright, they give you enough of an idea of what he's like (although I like a pic of them stood up without tack but that's just fussy, cos I buy horses that look like they've been welded together out of two write-offs anyway)

 

[L00bey]

He looks lovely if only I was looking now I would definately come and pay a visit

I just know that in 6months time when I actually am looking there will be nothing

Any way good luck selling him

 

[Skhosu]

I'm not sure if the vid helps or hinders personally with the bobbing head?
He looks lovely, better pics obv but you know that. Fingers crossed he goes quickly to a lovely new home.

 

[Colleen_Miss_Tom]

Hes lovely and should have no problem finding a home , sorry you have to sell

 

[Coffee_Bean]

He's lurvely!! Would be perfect for me if I was buying, sure he will sell at that price

 

[kandm]

Oh isn't he lovely!

I want him, he is such a stunner! I might just have to steal him in the night

!

 

[Weezy]

If he was a hand bigger you know I would buy him in a second *sob*

 

[moneypit1]

I thought his head "bobbed" a bit in trot as well. Other than that nice ad, piccys a bit dark but could be my pc. Good luck anyway.

 

[Halfstep]

Glad the photos (sort of) came out! It was sooo windy and horrid yesterday LOL, and my hands were so freezing I was struggling to hold onto the camera.

Good ad. I think he'll easily find a new home.

x

 

[Worried1]

But he is mine!!!!!!

He is a cutey and I reckon he will be snapped up very quickly!

 

[bexandspooky]

I am not even looking for a horse and I am tempted!! Great Ad!

 

[happyhack]

If i had the money, I'd take him!! He sounds lovely and looks it too.